Don't Do This

Don't Do This

A Poem by Jane Doe

You know I need you,
So you take advantage of me,
You tell me all this s**t,
Just playing watching how I react, oh you'll see.

You'll see my middle finger up,
Standing in our frontyard with a baby bump,
But you play with my heart,
Then toss me away to the dump.

You tell me you love,
You tell me you,
You lied straight to my face,
When you said you'll always be there.

So here's two for you,
One on each hand,
As your taxi drives off,
In our yard, I stand.

© 2017 Jane Doe


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Jane Doe
I don't know....

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SMH...ah uh...No He Did ant! Snap that finger and walk girlfriend! You go girl! Lol jk

Baby bump? SMH...don't live to fast...enjoy your youth...plenty of time to experience that stuff...food for thought...You'll shoot your out kid...okay sorry Christmas Story Movie reference.

Nevertheless, a very emotive write. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


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SMH...ah uh...No He Did ant! Snap that finger and walk girlfriend! You go girl! Lol jk

Baby bump? SMH...don't live to fast...enjoy your youth...plenty of time to experience that stuff...food for thought...You'll shoot your out kid...okay sorry Christmas Story Movie reference.

Nevertheless, a very emotive write. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nicepoem........stay with your middle figure up.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dear Abbi,

This poetry is quite intense and lot of grudge inside.

It pictures the revenge, anger, dissatisfaction, hatred, love, care and intensity.

I am not very sure is that your experience or mere thought but would definitely pray to the Almighty to prove it to be a thought and not experience of anybody.

I get goozbums when I imagine the scene of the baby bump standing at the gate and the person naming it is leaving away!

All together a very sad write.

Great efforts you made me feel what you wanted.

Keep up the good write,

Thanks for sharing.

Stay blessed
Prodical

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jane Doe

7 Years Ago

Thanks!!!!c:

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