Wish please!

i really would like a wish here....

WISH PLEASE!

 I could really use a wish right now,

Is it possible I could grab a bottle and just get a wish,

Could you drop a star in the sky and make it fly,

Can I get a wish.

 

I really need a wish right now!!!,

Is it okay if you gave me genie,

Or my personal star that fly's on command,

Can I get wish by now.

 

I really did need a wish back than,

You couldn't threw a genie my way,

Or my star that fly's,

didn't have to be a wishing one it just had to fly.

 

I don't need it now I'm far gone past my crappy time spand,

I'm floating in air whatching you sink in your time spand,

Two minutes ago I was seriously stressed ,

Now I Know Bliss.

Author's Note

phewwie that sucked butt

Reviews

[Jordan's Back]

I really need a wish right now!!!,
Is it okay if you gave me genie,
Or my personal star that fly's on command,
Can I get wish by now.

Simply Marvellous

[Jurikosan]

NU HUH Abbie i no i sed this 10000000000000 times but u r AMAZINNNNG!!!

[A]

I really like the idea of needing a wish. I bet everyone at one point in time wishes they could just have one wish :) The only critique I have is that there are a lot of grammar errors. Other than that...this poem was cute! :)