Make Me Lost

Make Me Lost

A Poem by FireFly
"

A phrase got stuck in my head, so I ran with it.

"

Lose yourself in me again

Breathe me in and let yourself go

Fight for the struggle

Forget for a moment the darkness

Lapping at your feet like the tide

Lose yourself in me again

So I can lose myself in you

© 2012 FireFly


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I love this poem.
Breathe me in and let yourself go
Fight for the struggle

Lose yourself in me again
So I can lose myself in you

Simply wonderfull.

Posted 10 Years Ago


FireFly

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
ron

10 Years Ago

Your most welcome :)
Lose yourself in me again
So I can lose myself in you

Ahh, very touchable lines.... these two lines're filled with some love, pain, depth and some dove. Liked this write much, i'd now love to see this write in my library. Awesome flow... i didn't know that your such a great writer... "You loved someone and someone loved you. you wanted to be lost in him, he wanted the same to lost in you...becuse you both were in love" I got your point.. it's written from the live heart. Beautiful and a lovely and deep and a bit sad write... but not sad it's an interesting write i think.

So, you deserved now 200/100 :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


An emotional poem, beautifully written. I like your choice of words and the picture you build.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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This is beautiful. Short, sweet and to the point.

"Breathe me in and let yourself go"

Very nice.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Interesting poem. I like how emotional you make it. Nice work!

Posted 11 Years Ago


A beautiful poem. Said so much in so few words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago



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