after

after

A Poem by Jason

after rains fall
and drench the earth
and landslides drag hearts astray

after lakes frost
and reflections freeze upon a stare
and branches move a skeleton sway

after the birth of a rose
and thawed rivers cleanse a memory
and breath vanishes from the banks

after thunder claps have softened
and lightning has no clouds to glow
and storms have no land to fall upon

after pain has no more souls to corrupt
and misery has no hearts to melt
and tears have no eyes to cry
is when I stand beside you

© 2010 Jason


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I agree with other commenters that last stanza really adds interest and a nice twist.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Aww this is,a,lovely poem. I sense it's referring to love.glad I've read this well done

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

sounds like a relationship that can't be shaken by any severe storms in life. conveys hope and solace. nice imagery of the seasons. excellent poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have so much going on in this write and it ends with a shoulder of support for those afflicted. Very interesting for sure. Your friend in words, Pete

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is really great*

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the final stanza is a startling shift. excellent poem.

Posted 12 Years Ago


That last stanza took me by surprise. I like your visualizations. My favorite line====== branches move a skeleton sway

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thank you everyone for your kind reviews!! :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


the last stanza really speaks

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Jason
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