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A Poem by James Paulin
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May-June poem

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late spring 

tulips go naked

trees don resplendent lime vestments

bugs converse

pleasure weather takes stage center

fledglings first try to hi-fly

rejoice

 

© 2009 James Paulin


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Congrats on your great first place poem

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Congrats on your great winning poem

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Very nice write indeed! ~ Helena

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This is a great Cameo.

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2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I particularly like the excellent word choice in your poem.

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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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