Here we go again

Here we go again

A Poem by James Paulin
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SEGUIDILLA

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Let’s twist again as back when.

Up, down, round and round,

baby did we dip and spin

to that sing-song sound.

Twistin’ revives us,

still craving those joyful moves.

Damn it! Arthritis! 

© 2010 James Paulin


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Haha I liked this alot, short and cute, funnyyyyyy :P

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cute twist at the end. I like it!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Revives us - Athritis
Yep. We'll let you away with that. Between athritis and RSI it's no life for a poet.
ATB
Alex.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It ain't haiku, but I recognize the territory...

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

That final twist is superb

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I doubt even arthritis would stop you!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

moving awfully fast, at least it took arthritis a while to catch you.
love the poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Funny! Very entertaining and flows so fast and so well.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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