cat clash

A Poem by James Paulin

micro-fun

stare

prepare

screech

claws reach

slash

fast thrash

heat

retreat

strut

tail jut

© 2010 James Paulin

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Fabian G. Franklin

lol this was cool and funny...I could see it all :o)

Posted 13 Years Ago

Phibby Venable

this is perfect...each word exact & bringing more impact
to the next one.

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

.	I like this I found it cute and creative. Posted 13 Years Ago I like this I found it cute and creative. Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wondering Mind

Macro-write..Perfect in it's capture of the spar

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nono

interesting omg! I have a boy cat poor thing can't fight! I told my dad I don't want him outside now he's limping and I'm going to have a few words with the cat that beat him up! NO ONE HURT MY KITTY! lol I like this though it's expressions give a strong sense of what your talking about. Nice job!

Posted 13 Years Ago

Fleur-de-lys

Yes! Reminds me of yesterday morning outside in my garden. Beautifully simple yet perfectly fitting piece!

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ed Hart

ser-she la cat-she

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 17, 2010
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James Paulin

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About

After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..