Overweight

Overweight

A Poem by James Paulin
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WOTD "satiate"

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Pangs cry, “satiate”

Dinner time so don’t be late

Mom said “clean your plate”

 


© 2010 James Paulin


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What a great write on over weight!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Some times, there's too much on the plate to clean off. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wow, this one shouts to me :)
Peace
Robin

Posted 9 Years Ago


Oh no, this is wrong! Very clever!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Feed me, feed me!
So sad that we are brainwashed from a tender age into eating everything..."don't waste the food"...arghhhh..."thanks mom, for all these extra pounds thriving on my hips!"

Posted 9 Years Ago


don't ingratiate
never be late for a date
?, just say she ate


Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it's addictive

Posted 9 Years Ago


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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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