squeeze

squeeze

A Poem by James Paulin



hug   

fresh start

hold and tug

heart close to heart

personal snug      

both impart

love lug

art


© 2011 James Paulin


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aww :) I just got another smile on my face. This is just like a big warm hug :D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful. You really capture the warmth of a hug. It made me smile, thankyou.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I want to write a poem tonight. I'd quite like it to have the effect this one had on me, to someone else... a smile, a slight chuckle and an underlieing gnawing. You have 17 words... I shall attempt to do it in under 70. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful, brings a smile to my face! Fascinating how symmetrical this is in form. The topic is well done and makes me feel all warm and fuzzy! Who doesn't like a hug?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 20, 2011
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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