Bang

Bang

A Poem by James Paulin
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Science Poetry

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string

relay

interplay

convey, emerge

infinitely surge

emanate, dissipate

gravitate to concentrate

pulled into singularity

scant plus or minus disunity

both infinitely imperceptible

transitions relative condition

by nature seeks broad dominion

hidden dimensions exist

revelations persist

Hawking theorized,

rationalized

Gods’ design

incline

So?


© 2011 James Paulin


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Very big-bang indeed, Hawking sneaked into your poem, awesome!

How about one on quantum physics sir?

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant, love string theory, whatever its faults, and Hawkings too, but to see the creation of the world put so succinctly, that's something.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

where we stop, nobody knows - or even why. very fine.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love science poetry! This is crafted so well. You've captured theory and presented it in its abstract form, from the spark to the big question.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I never was much good with science... I prefer to think of magic. Or are they the same thing?

Or is that blasphemy? Haha...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

the wonder of it is that all the yesterdays that mark the path of the creation don't add up to the blazing fire in this very heart beat, mine and yours

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So Abrupt is the end ... SO?
though, I could not help but find humor in it.
"Science Poetry" a new concept for me.
I like the structure and it's design.
It's scientific nature, I'm still absorbing.
Perceptive Write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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James Paulin
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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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