concentric

concentric

A Poem by James Paulin

 

naked arrival

flowers bear fruit, sweet or sour

to fulfill purpose

 

© 2011 James Paulin


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All kinds of fruit are needed for our health, this makes a nice metaphor to think about.

Posted 13 Years Ago


fruit is best naked. Pith is so ... cloying. But yes, fruit has purpose. Rightly so and so delicious.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A great haiku!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sweet our sour..all experiences fulkfill purpose..

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 2, 2011
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James Paulin
James Paulin

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After 38 years of working as an automotive design sculptor, I retired and have been doing a bit of fishing and writing poems. I've gotten better at both and had some recognition. Most of my poems are .. more..

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