Hold on to Me

Hold on to Me

A Poem by amyjane
"

A song, by me.

"

Hold on to me

 

This mountain is folding

Underneath me

 

I'm a river carving patterns

In all that I see

 

Hold on to me

Hold on to me

 

You can have it if you want it

Just come and see me

 

Pushing flowers into waters

As wild as the sea

 

Hold on to me

Hold on to me

 

I'm an ancient, monolithic

Super being

 

I can change you into patterns

And weave you into me

 

Hold on to me

 

-amyjane 2004-2005...i forget

© 2008 amyjane


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A wonderful poem, would make a good song.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Again, I wouldn't change anything!!! This is beautiful! Now this one, I hear as upbeat..kind of rock. I love it!
You really have major songwriting talent!!! ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 17, 2008

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amyjane
amyjane

Portland, OR



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I am a wife, mother and an artist. I make high-fired porcelain vessels and jewelry with my husband, a home business. We sell our stuff all over America and at our local weekend market. I love writ.. more..

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