Hold on to Me

Hold on to Me

A Poem by amyjane

A song, by me.


Hold on to me


This mountain is folding

Underneath me


I'm a river carving patterns

In all that I see


Hold on to me

Hold on to me


You can have it if you want it

Just come and see me


Pushing flowers into waters

As wild as the sea


Hold on to me

Hold on to me


I'm an ancient, monolithic

Super being


I can change you into patterns

And weave you into me


Hold on to me


-amyjane 2004-2005...i forget

© 2008 amyjane

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A wonderful poem, would make a good song.

Posted 12 Years Ago

Again, I wouldn't change anything!!! This is beautiful! Now this one, I hear as upbeat..kind of rock. I love it!
You really have major songwriting talent!!! ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on February 17, 2008



Portland, OR

I am a wife, mother and an artist. I make high-fired porcelain vessels and jewelry with my husband, a home business. We sell our stuff all over America and at our local weekend market. I love writ.. more..


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