The End of the Line

The End of the Line

A Poem by amyjane
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A song, by me.

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Is this the end of the line

For us, for you, for me

For everything that we believed

Was good, was right, was absolute

It's over now for me and you

Why - Is this the end of the line

 

You know it took us quite awhile

To get to here, to hardly smile

To look each other in the eye and cry

 

So, where'd we go so far away

From where we both began that day

So young. so wild and full of life

It's then that I became your wife

So why - Is this the end of the line

 

Is this the end of the line

For us, for you, for me

For everything that we believed

Was good, was right, was absolute

It's over now for me and you

Why - Is this the end of the line.

 

-amyjane 2007

© 2008 amyjane


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You,my friend, are a song writer. I usually don't accept friends who haven't reviewed my work, but I liked your profile, and I loved this song. I also love Emmy Lou Harris, and this has her feel. Rain..

Posted 12 Years Ago


I wouldn't change a single word! I LOVE this! As I read it I was singing it..it is catchy, has great flow..and the words really got me teary eyed. Excellent Amy! I'd love to know what genre you have this in. ;)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on February 17, 2008

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amyjane
amyjane

Portland, OR



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I am a wife, mother and an artist. I make high-fired porcelain vessels and jewelry with my husband, a home business. We sell our stuff all over America and at our local weekend market. I love writ.. more..

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