HEARTACHE

HEARTACHE

A Poem by FlawedByDesign
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Inspired by a girl that got away :(

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HEARTACHE

Longing for belonging
My heart aching, yearning
Mind weak and fading
Soul in pain, screaming

So I whispered to myself...

What your heart feels
The soul cries out
What your mind fears
The spirit defies.

Crazed by desire
Consumed by inner fire
Emotions fuel my conviction
Drain me of affection

So I told her...

Tainted by your magic
Prisoner of rapture
You've broken my will
My soul yours to keep.

© 2010 FlawedByDesign


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hehe - The reason for no punctuation, is for the flow and the form. Seeing how the lines are short, I did not want to pollute it with punctuation and have the reader pause. It's meant to be somewhat of a continues read apart from the break between the stanzas :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on June 14, 2010
Last Updated on July 7, 2010
Tags: poem, poetry, love, loss, pain, yearning, longing, affection

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FlawedByDesign
FlawedByDesign

Stratford, Ontario, Canada



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The name is Ivan - I'm 31. I am originally from Bosnia and Herzegovina. I left my country in 94 because of the civil war. After emigrating, my family lived in France for 2 years before coming to Canad.. more..

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