RED RIDING HOOD

RED RIDING HOOD

Room full of wolves
in sheep’s clothing,
making small talk,
strutting their bravados…

then she walked in.

The fire in her eyes
masked by the cowl
playing coy on her face.

Her elegance, provocative;
educing ravenous
looks of hunger,
fetching tongues
to come out and play.

But she is not
the meal for tonight…
THEY ARE.

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Forever Mine]

Hmm... This is very similar to a story i just wrote, about Red Riding Hood also lol. This was a very nice twist to say the least lol. Sexy,

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great flip on a fairy tale...this has a sexy mature feel..little red all grown up!

[Matthew Kult]

An excellent twist on a popular tale. Fantastic work.

with Love,

Jaidyn

[Brad]

bahahahahahahaha....definitely like this twist in this fairie tale...bravo, bro

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this poem. A very good ending. I always believe woman have the power to say yes or no. Men just believe they are in charge. You create a very good tale. A outstanding short poem.
Coyote

[Marie Harrison]

Very clever and seductive writing. I loved it!

[melissa]

well done:)

[Doreen]

This is fantastic. Nice spin on the hunter and the prey. Very well done.

[Valentine]

Now this one I really like..the layout is still not even but your thoughts are terrific..Good going..lol and God bless..Kathie