LIFE THREAD

A little sappy something...

LIFE THREAD

Your rain is my sun’s tomorrow,
The glimmer of hope in my eyes,
The song that hymns my heart to rise.

The angel I wake to every morning,
Under the sunshine of blue-gray skies,
The light that brightens my night’s guise.

You’re the wind that lays me to bed,
The kiss that tucks my dreams to sleep,
The thread that sews my life complete.

Author's Note

Just a little sappy something I put together for no one in particular, sadly :(

Reviews

[Molafvt]

How quickly we forget. Ivan my friend; the one who threw my life into pure chaos and then redeemed it again. Geeze man it seems like it's been years since I've visited you. Sappy or not this is a wonderfully constructed and colorful piece. Another brilliant Mantra, another symbol of your desire for the real deal and another testament to your devotion to an ideal. I love you or that man. I hope your feeling better every day.

Well, women generally like a little sappy. Keep writing like that and she'll turn up. ;)

[Liza]

you're a very romantic poet
with so much love to give
a complete lover
finding a partner to share

[dovetailer]

She's out there somewhere...someone who makes you feel suspended on a golden thread...you trust...feel weightless...
Wait til you have grandchildren...that is an amazing feeling...
there are new feelings out there awaiting you...savor every one...
Very nice sentiments...been there...done that...and missed them too

[Magdelena]

Not sappy at all. A wonderful array of words that flowed perfectly across the page.. Whenever you do meet that one, she will be one lucky woman..

Mags xx

[Alicia Schroeder]

cute, it makes me think of making a quilt..lol,jk, It was nicely written..

[AlieahRose]

WHENEVER YOU FIND SOMEONE...
MAKE SURE THEY MAKE YOU FEEL THIS WAY...
BECAUSE TO JUST COME UP WITH THAT...
WITHOUT HAVING THE EMOTIONALEXPERIENCE...
AT THE TIME...
IS SHEER GENEIUS...
AMAZING JOB MAN...

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is adorable, and I love how the last two lines complete the poem perfectly. Great closure, and great "sappy" words, if you so wish to call them "sappy".

[Forever Mine]

omg, the last stanza did it for me. out of all the love poems i have read, this has got to be my favorite. The last stanza was my favorite. i'm sorry you didnt write this for anyone in particular, cause if you would have, the girl couldnt help but love this. Very nice work, its going in my library.

[Moonflower]

Sweet~

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not sappy sentimental..to have someone like this is very special..