HEAVENLY SIGH

HEAVENLY SIGH

A Poem by FlawedByDesign

HEAVENLY SIGH

I love watching you sleep.


Your eyes silent as the stars that
kiss the night, parading their dreams
as you lay on my chest - whimsical.


Your breaths congregate atop
my goose-bumped skin,
giving life to the love that
dances on my flesh, whenever
you are near - rapturous.


The beat of your heart,
reverberates through me in
melodious harmony, bringing
heaven's sigh to my ears - enchanting.


You open your eyes with a smile...


Your lips make their way to mine,
tip-toeing up my neck, waltzing
on my chin, before falling asleep
in my embrace - unforgettable.

© 2010 FlawedByDesign


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this is a lovely poetic...it is the subtle nuances...the little joys that make love so involving...consuming...the thinks so easily missed...like the things along the road as we go speeding by...its the little things that connect us...like stitches of thread in a seam on fabric...one by one they connect us together...

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very romantic:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


I was entranced at the first line.... still am. Sweet write. Love it dearly~
~lovely♥lady

Posted 9 Years Ago


watching the one you sleep beside you is relaxing and awing. It brings a sense of peace and relaxation to your life. Every moment with that special person can be magical. This poem is sweet, delicate and soothing. You have done a great job painting the imagery in this poem and the emotions are clearly conveyed where the reader can feel what you are speaking of.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is an enchanting piece! Very well written and wonderfully formed! A pleasure to read!

Posted 9 Years Ago


i love it! it is romantic

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wonderful - romantic without being a cheese-fest.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The title is beautiful perfect as is this lovely romantic and poetic piece...

Posted 9 Years Ago


A delicate poem of a special, tender moment. What I would give to live those moments again. Thanks Ivan for bringing back such fond memories, and once again, a wonderful poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


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what a lovely romantic poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


this is a lovely poetic...it is the subtle nuances...the little joys that make love so involving...consuming...the thinks so easily missed...like the things along the road as we go speeding by...its the little things that connect us...like stitches of thread in a seam on fabric...one by one they connect us together...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Tags: poem, poetry, romance, love, heaven, sigh, kiss, embrace, enchanting, unforgettable

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FlawedByDesign
FlawedByDesign

Stratford, Ontario, Canada



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The name is Ivan - I'm 31. I am originally from Bosnia and Herzegovina. I left my country in 94 because of the civil war. After emigrating, my family lived in France for 2 years before coming to Canad.. more..

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