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A Poem by FlawedByDesign


I love watching you sleep.

Your eyes silent as the stars that
kiss the night, parading their dreams
as you lay on my chest - whimsical.

Your breaths congregate atop
my goose-bumped skin,
giving life to the love that
dances on my flesh, whenever
you are near - rapturous.

The beat of your heart,
reverberates through me in
melodious harmony, bringing
heaven's sigh to my ears - enchanting.

You open your eyes with a smile...

Your lips make their way to mine,
tip-toeing up my neck, waltzing
on my chin, before falling asleep
in my embrace - unforgettable.

© 2010 FlawedByDesign

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this is a lovely is the subtle nuances...the little joys that make love so involving...consuming...the thinks so easily the things along the road as we go speeding by...its the little things that connect stitches of thread in a seam on by one they connect us together...

Posted 9 Years Ago

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This may be one of the most beautiful things I have ever read....absolutely stunning. That last stanza is just pure gold.....wonderful work Ivan.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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A beautiful poem. Those tender moments are the memories we need to hold on to and make more of the same as soon as possible. Beautiful words and ending of your poem. A amazing poem. Thank you.

Posted 9 Years Ago

How romantic..with words like this to say to ia a wonder she takes the time for and God bless..Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago

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Quite possibly one of the most beautiful poems I've read to date. I'm always a little uncertain reading one of your works. You tend to throw me off some; not exactly a bad thing. No need to say, but very well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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It's funny how I can relate to you in this even though we are of opposite sex. Half the time my husband falls asleep hours before I do and I will stay up just to watch him. Sometimes I wish he'd do the same with me but there are others when I just enjoy those precious moments that steal my breath away. Wonderful peice. Keep Writing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Posted 9 Years Ago

Great poem!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago

they are always so angelic when they's when they wake up you want to smother them with a pillow to put them out mean, good poem...:P

Posted 9 Years Ago

the magic before falling into dream ~

Posted 9 Years Ago

Ah... what a sweet poem. Lovely.

Posted 9 Years Ago

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21 Reviews
Added on October 21, 2010
Last Updated on October 21, 2010
Tags: poem, poetry, romance, love, heaven, sigh, kiss, embrace, enchanting, unforgettable



Stratford, Ontario, Canada

The name is Ivan - I'm 31. I am originally from Bosnia and Herzegovina. I left my country in 94 because of the civil war. After emigrating, my family lived in France for 2 years before coming to Canad.. more..


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