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BORN IN YOUR BREATH

BORN IN YOUR BREATH

A Poem by FlawedByDesign

BORN IN YOUR BREATH


I see you.


Delicate curves of your
wanton smile part
to reveal the insatiable
dance of your tongue.


I pull you closer.


Your breath ascending
from the heart, dripping
honey, unclothing a bite
of lustful craving.


I embrace you.


My mouth seizing yours
with the moist of my lips,
burning back the fire
inside of you.


I taste you.


My tongue unfolds into
a song upon touching yours,
quenching my thirst
with your love.


I adore you.


Reborn in the breath
that lingers upon
your lips beneath
passionate eyes.

© 2012 FlawedByDesign


Author's Note

FlawedByDesign
Awarded 2nd in the following contest:
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/So-you-got-what-it-takes%3F/12510/

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The title is to die for - simply sublime!
I love the way you start this poem - "I see you" - such a beautiful, simple introduction but, you 'see' deeper, you want more ...I love how feelings, sensations, emotions follow, dressed in lust, sultry passion and tender sensuality...thoughts, like a trickle of honey poured onto smooth, warm skin, slowly making its way, leaving a lingering, sweet trail. (ohhhhhh...I could sooooo do with a kiss like that right now!!) Tantalizing, vivid imagery....YES! a super fabulous write!

Posted 10 Years Ago


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The imagery is amazing like always, I had just realized that you are really good at writing thesse sensual poems. Kepp up the good writes!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I love the passion here, very real. Great read!

"dripping
honey, unclothing a bite
of lustful craving." is my favorite line



Posted 10 Years Ago


This poem flows nicely and the you make the kiss such a magical heart melting knee weakening one. This is the way everyone wants and should be kisses.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Breathless......

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wonderful sensual and tactile poetry, well written Ivan 7 points

Posted 10 Years Ago


This took my breath away. Sensual, delightful!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Very deep

Posted 10 Years Ago


No feedback...I am going to give my honey a big kiss..Nice one..sets a mood I can tell you..Kathie

Posted 10 Years Ago


this poem just, puts you at an awe. the formatting fits ideally into your poem.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Last Updated on September 14, 2012
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FlawedByDesign
FlawedByDesign

Stratford, Ontario, Canada



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The name is Ivan - I'm 31. I am originally from Bosnia and Herzegovina. I left my country in 94 because of the civil war. After emigrating, my family lived in France for 2 years before coming to Canad.. more..

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