BORN IN YOUR BREATH

BORN IN YOUR BREATH

A Poem by FlawedByDesign

BORN IN YOUR BREATH


I see you.


Delicate curves of your
wanton smile part
to reveal the insatiable
dance of your tongue.


I pull you closer.


Your breath ascending
from the heart, dripping
honey, unclothing a bite
of lustful craving.


I embrace you.


My mouth seizing yours
with the moist of my lips,
burning back the fire
inside of you.


I taste you.


My tongue unfolds into
a song upon touching yours,
quenching my thirst
with your love.


I adore you.


Reborn in the breath
that lingers upon
your lips beneath
passionate eyes.

© 2012 FlawedByDesign


Author's Note

FlawedByDesign
Awarded 2nd in the following contest:
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/So-you-got-what-it-takes%3F/12510/

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The title is to die for - simply sublime!
I love the way you start this poem - "I see you" - such a beautiful, simple introduction but, you 'see' deeper, you want more ...I love how feelings, sensations, emotions follow, dressed in lust, sultry passion and tender sensuality...thoughts, like a trickle of honey poured onto smooth, warm skin, slowly making its way, leaving a lingering, sweet trail. (ohhhhhh...I could sooooo do with a kiss like that right now!!) Tantalizing, vivid imagery....YES! a super fabulous write!

Posted 9 Years Ago


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The imagery is amazing like always, I had just realized that you are really good at writing thesse sensual poems. Kepp up the good writes!

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love the passion here, very real. Great read!

"dripping
honey, unclothing a bite
of lustful craving." is my favorite line



Posted 9 Years Ago


This poem flows nicely and the you make the kiss such a magical heart melting knee weakening one. This is the way everyone wants and should be kisses.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Breathless......

Posted 9 Years Ago


Wonderful sensual and tactile poetry, well written Ivan 7 points

Posted 9 Years Ago


This took my breath away. Sensual, delightful!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Very deep

Posted 9 Years Ago


No feedback...I am going to give my honey a big kiss..Nice one..sets a mood I can tell you..Kathie

Posted 9 Years Ago


this poem just, puts you at an awe. the formatting fits ideally into your poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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FlawedByDesign
FlawedByDesign

Stratford, Ontario, Canada



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The name is Ivan - I'm 31. I am originally from Bosnia and Herzegovina. I left my country in 94 because of the civil war. After emigrating, my family lived in France for 2 years before coming to Canad.. more..

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