IN THE WHISPER OF YOUR KISS

IN THE WHISPER OF YOUR KISS

A Poem by FlawedByDesign

IN THE WHISPER OF YOUR KISS

Your fingers tango with my face,
elegant and sweet,
like a muse playing the harp
in heavenly winds.


You trace the outline of my lips
with your tongue,
looking for the resting place
of your kiss.


You guide my gaze through
your breath to rest on your lips,
as the scarlet of your mouth
sings the rhapsody of love
carried on sensual waves
of your heart’s sigh,
arousing my sinful curiosity,
evoking the flirtatious
deviant inside of me.


The whispers of your tongue
are drawing me in,
teasing me to stay;
bewitching me to sleep
on the blanket of your desire.


As your mouth explodes into mine,
it intrigues me.


You bathe in my tears of passion,
inhaling the love from my heart;
enslaving me,
in the whisper of your kiss.

© 2012 FlawedByDesign


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I like not looking ath the profile before whipping a poem into the ol head banks.
I saw a very feminine kick to this. That's not in an offensive way, but the understanding of love in the sex of another is a nice way to expand style.
Usually women focus on lips
we focus on tits

Nice read and well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is awesome! It breaths excitement and definitely reminds me of my best kiss.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sexy write..makes me remember when...........Valentine

Posted 9 Years Ago


I like not looking ath the profile before whipping a poem into the ol head banks.
I saw a very feminine kick to this. That's not in an offensive way, but the understanding of love in the sex of another is a nice way to expand style.
Usually women focus on lips
we focus on tits

Nice read and well done

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is a stunning way to describe a kiss. The flow is easy to follow and the imagery is quite steamy.

Posted 9 Years Ago


There's nothing as intimate as kissing. Nice imagery here. The only thing that didn't sit with me well was the line:
As your mouth explodes into mine. I get the image of shrapnel. And then having it be intriguing doesn't fit well for me.
I like the passion and the romantic heat that this portrays. Nicely done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


very passionate great job

Posted 9 Years Ago


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now that it a poetic kiss! Absolutely wonderful

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love the title and this is quite sensual...nicely done...

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on January 18, 2011
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Tags: poem, poetry, love, romance, girl, kiss, whisper, tongue, passion

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FlawedByDesign

Stratford, Ontario, Canada



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The name is Ivan - I'm 31. I am originally from Bosnia and Herzegovina. I left my country in 94 because of the civil war. After emigrating, my family lived in France for 2 years before coming to Canad.. more..

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