FORGOTTEN

FORGOTTEN

A Poem by floarealbastra10

It's late again and I can't sleep
Keep thinking about his sweet lips..
Passionate kisses like never before
Awakened me to the core of my soul
                        but he don't hear me anymore
                        he's forgotten the love.



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"Passionate kisses like never before
Awakened me to the core of my soul'

very affecting. a lucid dream of "Forgotten"
~great expressionism!


Posted 13 Years Ago


My only suggestion is that you change "don't" to "doesn't." Other than that, great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago


What a foolish boy, love should always be cherished and remembered. Even if the love has ended, the memory of it enriches us.. Nice piece, but I don't like the picture. There is no man worth dying for.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on November 16, 2010
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