Death not to be feared

Death not to be feared

A Poem by Mr.Commentator

Death is on mind

Death is feared my many

Admired by few

And not feared by the strong

Death happens

Death is here

Death is upon us all

Death has no voice

Death has a reason

Death is bound to happen

To us all it seems dark

In reality

It is light

To whom relize

Death is here

© 2011 Mr.Commentator


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Wonderful thoughts posed in this poem. Again, a few miner errors of grammar and spelling... also words left out or a wrong letter used for what you meant. Perhaps you should take the time to re-read your work before posting it. It's easy to make simple errors that renders the poem difficult to understand. For the most part, I liked this very much. You tackle a subject poets have written about from every possible angle. Nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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There is so much depth and truth in this poem. My husband almost died from a stroke in 2011. After that, I realized that I had to let go of my fear of death and accept that it is part of life....

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nice poem, its interesting to see how you view death. Enjoyed the poem a lot.
- only thing is like MsMermaid said about a few simple mistakes. However, it contains excellent content.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wonderful thoughts posed in this poem. Again, a few miner errors of grammar and spelling... also words left out or a wrong letter used for what you meant. Perhaps you should take the time to re-read your work before posting it. It's easy to make simple errors that renders the poem difficult to understand. For the most part, I liked this very much. You tackle a subject poets have written about from every possible angle. Nice.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Mr.Commentator

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