Love is

Love is

A Story by Mr.Commentator
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Its about what im going through right now

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Love is

love is a dream,

love is a magical feeling,

love is spiritual,

love is special

love isnt hard

love is an adventure,

love is not a moment,

love is a life changing moment

love is real

love is comes when you meet you match

© 2011 Mr.Commentator


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Love it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Beautiful story! Keep it up!

(And yeah, there were a few typo's, but that doesn't matter when you're in a hurry....Actually, I think it does....**Shrugs** Hmm...I don't know....)

Posted 8 Years Ago


sorry i did this one on a fly

Posted 8 Years Ago


Okay. I'm a bit confused. Ian thought your story "Boy Meets Girl" was a poem. This story reads more like a prose poem than a story. Aside from the grammatical errors and typos... For instance the last two lines should read "Love comes when you meet your match." Using a smaller font size would enable you to put what should be one line into one line instead of two. The words are heartfelt and personal to you and that's the main thing that counts... expressing your heart. Keep up your efforts and contributions to read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is good! Other than a couple grammatical mistakes, this is an amazing story!

Posted 8 Years Ago



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