Lara I Love Alaura

For Lara Gandre

 

Lara I Love Alaura

 

 

 

Lara, I love Alaura

who is not yet. I will

will her to me, to BE.

It’ll take Another

to make her my <3

I pray for this,

patiently.

 

 

God wills She

has thy mystery to me

you have/are “presence”

without dimensions,

hesitations percolate

rapidly as I consider

thoughts nebulized

into their sensing essence.

 

 

Where you bring me

every time I venture

on the sameness of you,

there is none,

quite, “Quite”

 

 

If you were a bird

I would sing your name

to call my Alaura

here to my delight!

How can I shift

Tone and Spirit,

make concept

Love Bones…

I near it

with knowing

You.

 

 

I could go on

and on, and Do….

I needed You

to know this

way I have

of enduring

endearing Truth.

 

 

Ultimate Truth is where

your flowing leads me Fara

even making corny words up

to express my loving kindness Lara…

 

 

 

 

 

 

Robin

 

 

 

Author's Note

I love the name " Alaura " and would like to name my first daughter so...:)

Reviews

[Dani California]

This is lovely Robin!

While reading I sang it,
and it sounds wonderful
as a song!

First stanza -- chorus. :):)

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Ok, and as the wonderful poem that it is:

"I could go on
and on, and Do�.
I needed You
to know this
way I have
of enduring
endearing Truth."

I particularly liked this stanza.
It's indeed.. endearing.


You rock!
But, I've already said that. :):)

[Angel's Lady]

hesitations percolate
rapidly as I consider
thoughts nebulized
into their sensing essence.

(Somebody's in love! I don't know who but somebody is! *walks off whistling....*)

Great job!

[An owl on the moon]

A beautiful dance of words and phrases that moves around the reader with magnificence!

Craig

you kick my a*s in all fields of writing... I can only be jealous of your work for they are amazing.

And yet, with all this jealousy, I always look forward to how wonderful your pieces can get, and how they shine so well. I love to read your pieces, and this one really beats them all...

A new serenade men will sing to women (in Spain, where they still do serenade), and for the rest of us, something nice to listen to in the radio, as long as you choose a good singer to sing it.

Otherwise, that is the most beautiful piece you can ever offer to any woman, a priceless gift

[Janice Ann]

"If you were a bird I would sing your name to call my Alaura here to my delight! How can I shift Tone and Spirit, make concept" What a beautiful way to describe it. It makes my heart melt. I could go on and on, and Do�. I needed You to know this way I have of enduring endearing Truth." You are such a smooth talker...You can call me Alaura...if indeed you love it so much! HAHA

Janice Ann

[Freedom]

how sweet! women dream of poetry being written for them in this sense. it's beautiful, and lara gandre is very deserving of such beauty.

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Beautiful name and I agree with the featured review - a wonderful use of word play - slips off of your tongue just perfectly. Your poems always do that. Nicely penned. Thank you.
Light,
Siddartha

[The Autumn Faerie]

Beautiful poem for a beautiful name.
I am quite fond of 'A' names.
I love the names Augusta and Aislinn.

[Broken.]

Fara. I like it, they should add it to the dictionary instead of weird slang :| ? ? ?

[Belator Books]

It had almost the feel of a pleasant dirge, much like Annbel Lee. Nicely done.