Amendment

Amendment

A Chapter by one sky


I just want to know the real reason

Why you hate me so much.

If I have done more damages

Than what I knew,

Can you please tell me the truth

And show before my eyes

And let me hear clearly

How I became so bad yesterday?

At least when I know something

Though it hurts

I won’t wake up in the morning

With countless Why’s and How’s

And I shall be in peace

Forever…



© 2013 one sky


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Message delivered and it seems poignant and urgent. The piece itself rings true. But then again it can be a matter of context The pice seems to have a sudden disruption to it and I suppose that's the issue and that's what makes it true as far as my limited understanding can tell.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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"I won’t wake up in the morning

With countless Why’s and How’s

And I shall be in peace

Forever..."

Let your soul answer the pain in the hurt and let your mind answer the mud in the dirt...Bravo

Posted 6 Years Ago


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one sky

6 Years Ago

My old piece...
Time healed the wound already.
Thank you so much.
Message delivered and it seems poignant and urgent. The piece itself rings true. But then again it can be a matter of context The pice seems to have a sudden disruption to it and I suppose that's the issue and that's what makes it true as far as my limited understanding can tell.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We are alway left with some unanswered questions. It's the motivation for moving on and finding subject in the human realm that will be able to answer them in the way we need. Often time's it's never us that was at fault, usually it was somebody else that wasn't thinking right or simply a situation that spun out of control. While one should surely have hope that certain possibilities might happen, one shouldn't let that hope be an anchor upon life swirls around sucks the soul into the the pits of eternal dispair.

I will agree with you that knowing is better than not though. I can relate to the words in that they mirror some past experiences, yet I've chosen not to weigh myself down with those people that don't answer my questions. =)

XO = Kate

Posted 6 Years Ago


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one sky

6 Years Ago

Thanks for dropping by in this page, Kaitlynn. I appreciate your kind words.
Answers don't always provide you with peace. Sometimes it seems like they will. An answer will always leave something answered.

Posted 6 Years Ago


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one sky

6 Years Ago

Thanks, Diana. Your words make me ponder...

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