PLEASE

PLEASE

A Chapter by one sky
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please...please...

"
Please tell me,
             please hurt me now
                         While the wound
                                      is not yet deep
                                                   For if you'll make
                                                           this longer somehow
                            You'll be like the rest
    who made me weep.


© 2014 one sky


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Can you feel me hugging you in my heart? Your pain is palpable in this piece. I wish I could tell you that it's going to be all right. Take care little love

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

one sky

6 Years Ago

Thanks for feeling my sentiments but I know this will end...
You are prolific today....that's a good thing.

Understandable words here.....

Scott

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

one sky

6 Years Ago

Prolific? Thanks for such funny description in this time of madness and sadness...
Scott Metro

6 Years Ago

I wish I could help you with your sadness..Does he write lovely things about you..then you go read t.. read more

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