FOREVERMORE

space

I am a selfish one, I really know
When I said that I don't want you to go
I'm not so sure of myself everytime
Afraid to hurt you more, it's like a crime.

Oh, how I love you so but I can't tell
This feelings that I have  is like a spell
I cannot sleep at night thinking of you
I don't know what to say or what to do.

You know that I am caged, I am not free
I have so many fears, boy, can't you see?
I really want to stay there in your heart
But you don't put me there even a part.

I want to see you smile and live with joy
Together with your love, my precious boy
I am here just a friend to love you more
Your words will stay with me forevermore...

Author's Note

Reviews

[Deuces]

As a lover of the rhyme, you mastered it in this piece. Space is the most difficult, painful part of love. Most of us cannot succeed at staying at it and succumb. The thoughts of a loved one can feel so right and so wrong at the same time. Beautifully conveyed.

[one sky]

Thanks, G.

[Troy Henson]

Mmmm oh how i feel this piece. The dilemma of feeling olive for someone and caring for that person so much but no amount of love captures this person to be yours officially. It's hard to love someone so much but you just can't have them and lately I do find myself asking the question...how do i love someone so much but let them go until they are ready. Love is hard.

Regards
Troy

[one sky]

Yes, it's really hard to love. Thanks, Troy. I appreciate your words.

[Faceless Poet]

a song of love and hurt
of an endless beat but too afraid
to see, too selfish to confide
just a smile you wish to see
free from the emotional crime
forever bless with friendship
that's all you could be,
in the heart of the precious you would be....

- Faceless being.