I Need You

I need your touch 

to gently relieve me

I need your words 

to calmly appease me

I need your energy 

to peacefully guide me 

away from the bitter-sour residue that consumes me

I need you to steer me away from those

faucets of flowing confusion 

mini earthquakes 

terrifying delusions

I need you to keep my soul safe and sound

Reviews

[Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAutho..]

Gentle and touching, Audrie. I sure hope there is someone there for YOU... someone that understands (as much as is possible) the person that is you, understands that your purpose, your life-engagement is not for the faint-of-heart. It takes a toll. Listening, caring or trying hard not to care too much -- to not become soiled with that "bitter-sour residue" that pours from "faucets of flowing confusion." (P.S. I am sooo happy to see someone using their artistic talents in conjunction with their writing. I live for the personal touch from an author. That's what makes this all worthwhile.)

100 safe soundings

[audrie]

That was a very thoughtful review. (bit of personal info) Nope, there is nobody there right now but it is completely by choice. I decided not to date anyone until my children were grown because relationships take so much attention. Oh my god. . . uggh! I only have 5 more years to go! yay!

[nseddy]

Nicely Done Audrie!

I need you to keep my soul safe and sound

That says it all really, I really enjoyed this.

[audrie]

Thanks for the kind review!

[Swaroop Manikandan]

well written my friend...

[audrie]

thank you!

[Saddam]

I need your words
to calmly appease me

Beautiful dear... Feel it.

[audrie]

Thanks for taking the time to review this = ]

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

Beautiful poem, I loved reading it. :-)
We all want that special person, it may not be, today tomorrow, next week, next month, and or next year. Everyone will find their soulmate at some point in time. :-)

Nicely written

Kaze~ :-)

[audrie]

I couldn't agree more - the trick to finding that special someone is to remain patient. Thanks for the review

[Avinash]

Ah..we all wish the same Audrie.. your poem mirrors the desire of every lonely heart.

[audrie]

thanks for the review Avinash. . . I'm still waiting patiently for someone to fill my lonely heart

[Avinash]

My warm wishes would always be there for you :) Please do the same for me as well :)