Kill Me Now

I'm crying blistering tears

I'm leaking floodwaves of fear

Grappling for a lifeline

Just need some more time

Breaking apart at the seems

My soul's no longer pristine

your dark presence lingers

puncturing me with dagger like fingers

Clinging with hope

For a better tomorrow

Praying that you won't stay

Praying away goes the sorrow

Your crippling torture

gives me fear of no future

You're startling movements

Cause me so much confusion

So just kill me now

I know you'll know how!

Reviews

[♔ CrownedDevil &#..]

I love this poem, nicely done. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A wild and dark journey in your words. The poem took the reader to places of torture and no escape. I like the ending. Direct and honest. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[audrie]

Thanks for the kind review - it makes me feelo good to know that people are enjoying the read!

[Coyote Poetry]

Was a wild ride. Still a very good poem and you are welcome.

[Donald]

The dark side is gripping your soul, but it is also the driving force in your life. This is a good piece, but sometimes we must take a step back to look what you are writing.

[audrie]

thanks for the review!

[Cassie]

I totally agree with annie...negativity should not be allowed anywhere near your life..nice poem

[audrie]

thanks for the review!

[anne]

If you think negativity is entering your life......throw it out.......as far as poem is concerned its really a very good write.....

[Avinash]

A haunting cry . Every time we allow a negative person take control over our lives we feel the same . My point...go down fighting rather surrender to evil.

[audrie]

I agree with you 100 percent - and in this world today you have to keep fighting! Thanks for the review!

[Cory Barrett]

This is soaked in fear, and I'm too frightened to read again

[audrie]

Thanks for the review Cory!

[Matching Socks]

Very dark powerful words that paint an unpleasant scene, but an important message.
Great write.

[audrie]

Thanks for the review Ance!