Venus Flytrap Mistletoe

Venus Flytrap Mistletoe

A Poem by Fran Marie
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A collaboration write by Sean M. Addams and Fran Marie

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Venus Flytrap Mistletoe


.Mistletoe can be deadly


Venus Flytrap mistletoe

drops of red will hang below

stand directly under so it won't miss

bringing a new meaning to a deadly kiss

it's jolly green jaws must be feed

first it will shallow your plump round head

it's acid like salvia eats way at your skin

killer memories of a bloody christmas will begin

pucker up for the deadest kiss of your life

it's worse than carving you with a butcher knife

the poison kills slowly as it drips and inflicts pain

a burning sensation with nothing to gain

you'll beg for mercy and wish for death

when Venus Flytrap Mistletoe grabs your last breath

drops of red will drip below

Venus Flytap Mistletoe

© 2010 Fran Marie


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Wow this is a great collaboration between you and Sean once again. I am definitely going to think twice before I stand under mistletoe to get a kiss. I am going to be checking out that little plant long and hard before I stand under it. the details where amazing and the flow of the poem is very smooth.

Posted 10 Years Ago


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fun little snapping

Posted 10 Years Ago


Chilling imagery. Penned so well. An excellent collaboration. Great work you two!

Posted 10 Years Ago


Wryly humourous. but nevertheless a topical warning

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

is this the kind they sell at wal-mart ? happy hellidays

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

awesome colab!~ wicked shivery!~

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is really wicked!!! What a vision this poem gives!! You did great on this collaboration with Sean.

Posted 10 Years Ago


wow this was a fantastic collaboration..dark but so well done...I like the name of Venus Flytrap Mistletoe...it fits perfectly...nice work...

Posted 10 Years Ago


What a wickedly evil Christmas scene this creates! Fantastic collaboration!


Posted 10 Years Ago


Wow this is a great collaboration between you and Sean once again. I am definitely going to think twice before I stand under mistletoe to get a kiss. I am going to be checking out that little plant long and hard before I stand under it. the details where amazing and the flow of the poem is very smooth.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

thanks for collabrating with me on this .. a funny and creepy piece with a big bite to it... I think we did great on this :)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Fran Marie

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