no feelings

Loneliness Leads to Pain.

Pain leads to Anger

Anger leads to Self Loathing

Self Loathing leads to Self Destruction

Self Destruction leads Panic

Panic leads to Fear

Fear leads to Sorrow

Sorrow leads to Tears.

Tears lead to Change

Change leads to NO Emotions!

Reviews

[Sasha]

Ooo, it's pretty. There are many gates of Hell in Florida, which are you at? :P
As for this poem, I loved the "Fear... Tears." lines. You get points for originality amd for explaining how some people can be such robots.

[QuietPoet]

Excellent, I love how you did the format and the repeation. Very nice and so true.