the performance

the performance

A Poem by freelancejouster

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

"Oh, what a wonderful show that was, lovely, just lovely.  i was distracted though, during the whole performance by something i couldn't quite place.  it wasn't until i'd gotten back home that i realized that was exactly how my father died some twenty-odd years ago... hahhah, imagine that!  but the show, ah, the show, i can't wait to see it again, those special effects!  how did you get that squid to look so real?  darling, you must tell me..."

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2011 freelancejouster


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I would say the same thing people have already mentioned here..the humor and the sarcasm is perfectly timed ! loved the piece ..

Posted 12 Years Ago


nice... i like ur humor dear... encore! XD
*cocoabean*

Posted 13 Years Ago


Wow! bit of dark humor! You know I love it. The squid line nearly made me spit my coffee. LOL!

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on February 9, 2011
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