lost is the new found

stand tall among the lines of the lost

and gaze upon a glowing deity

of human proportions.

heaven-sent preacher

with a silver voice,

trades your children

for your eternal salvation.

not to worry, though,

he's just out for carnal enjoyment,
of the sickest, feral pleasure,

nothing less, nothing more

your happiness

can't sacrifice that

to live on with him forever...

or am i right?

Reviews

[Cocoacandy]

huh? a bit confusing at the end, but otherwise i like it... i like ur way of writing... its so different from all the others i am used to reading...

[arlery]

Great job.
I really liked it !