karmapol

karmapol

A Chapter by freelancejouster

their watching eyes,
dissecting your every movement
and analyzing every action,
causing paranoia
when you'd rather not be.


of course,
one cannot count on that,
not anymore,
the feeling of probing eyes,
bugs-on-your-skin craziness ensues,
causing all the catastrophes
that they were searching for in the first place.

and you look up at them with bloody mouth
and crazed smile
as they drag you to the white,
soft-walled room they assisted you
so patiently, to.


© 2011 freelancejouster


Author's Note

freelancejouster
karmapol: the imaginary committee of elders that keeps a running log of your mistakes, steadily building their case that you’re secretly a fraud, a coward, a doofus and a douche, and who would’ve successfully revoked your good fortune years ago had they not been hampered by bitter squabblings over grammar and spelling.

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i can see how this council could precipitate a nervous breakdown due to paranoia. you did a good job illustrating this word.

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Added on August 27, 2011
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