zitella

zitella

A Chapter by freelancejouster

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

something of a glint in his eye,

grease for hair

and

cheese for a smile.

 

swagger for a walk,

strut, preen.

 

 

Narcissus was less into himself.

at least,

probably.

 

and of course,

he preys on girls

with cliche lines

and an air of bravado.

 

 

 

 

to hide the feminine

curve of his

hips.

 

 

 

 

 



© 2012 freelancejouster


Author's Note

freelancejouster
zitella: maiden; unmarried woman, bachelorette

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i guess the last line made me confused. the rest was great, very descriptive of the type of character this person is. i agree with that other guy a couple words before that this is a good way of showing and not telling. excellent job.

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Added on March 18, 2012
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