The wonderful mind

The wonderful mind

A Poem by Freeman

The mind is a wonder
I wonder about
so quick to react 
in our time of doubt
I'm a thinker of, thinkers
who thinks too much
I drink in, thoughts 
I have thought too much. 
where would we be without
a beautiful mind 
A place in our soul
That we could not find.

© 2010 Freeman


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I LOVE IT! I am an idealist and I am constantly thinking. Some times my anticipation for all can be disapointing, but for the most part, I wouldn't trade it for the world. We are teaching kids to go by the book too much these days. Imagination and an open mind is key. The mind is much to beautiful to keep closed. We each have a beautiful and individually unique mind. Too many try to conform to often and love with limits an a closed mind. This is beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I believe education is the cure all for this world. Men blinded to logic thinking are running the world. I have travel the world. People in Africa, Asia and Europe minds are stronger then the USA. Need more thinkers with beautiful minds. Not greed and power as their only goal. I like this poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


If you see something without thought whats the point .I agree you can see without emotion but not thought.
Constructive criticism is good but not a rant.


Posted 8 Years Ago


th thoughts is where you go hanky panky diddle don day. The thoughts tie you down to something you are which may be naught. Give thoughts a break. Just see what you see without emo. Its all right. You don't have to take sacrament for it.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is a great poem. The last four lines are say it all. Now if only we could meld the two.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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indeed the mind is a beautiful thing..and this had a nice sentiment :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


For someone whose new at poetry you sure excelled fast! i see where you write songs, thats a great bridge to cross over when you have the ability you do. excellent work!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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. wow ... beautifully said ...


Posted 8 Years Ago



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Freeman
Freeman

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