Closing doors

Closing doors

A Poem by Freeman

Living and dying 
are equally hard
Always- just trying
to deal with the card.
 
Bad, good 
Real,love
time oh time 
never enough.

When does it end
the struggle of life
Is there ever a time
will I feel "This is right"

For now carry on
as  we before
try to keep open 
the ever closing door

© 2010 Freeman


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Peace and calm come often in our life. We just wish to make them last longer. In my life I found many places where I found friendship and peace. But we must work, make money and fall into wrong places to know what we need and want. If we look at our life. There is a lot of good also. Life is a struggle. Everyone need a day to do what they desire. A long walk. A long talk with a friend. Or just watching the sun rise and fall into the sea. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Clever and lovely. A 'make-you-think' poem. 100/100

Posted 8 Years Ago


Right now in my life this poem could be my personalanthem. Nicely written my friend

Posted 8 Years Ago


Enjoyed reading your work this early morn..Thanks for choosing me as a friend..Sunflower

Posted 8 Years Ago


The last four lines in particular..loved them..

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is such a profound write.. you made me examine my own life just a bit more.. what is important.. and why.. For me the second passage struck me: "Time oh time .. never enough." It's so true..

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on October 16, 2010
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Freeman
Freeman

United Kingdom



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