Almost

Almost

A Poem by Freeman

Your words ring true
throughout my soul,
Clumsy , foolish
when left alone.
Hearts to nourish
care to feed,
neglected of passion
will start to bleed.
Stem the flow 
Compress with love.
Almost perfect
too perfect 
to touch.

© 2010 Freeman


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Posted 8 Years Ago


Wow...
Great Write!
I love the story you are talking about, and I love this!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is so well delieverd, Thoughts from the heart flow so well. Wonderful write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the structure of this poem, the repetition and the lines dwindling at the end.

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


There are such richly painted thoughts flowing here, as you confess a loving dependence on another.. one who speaks deeply to your heart. And your last line is a brilliant expression of that overwhelming sense of being.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Added on October 18, 2010
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Freeman
Freeman

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