Darkness

Darkness

A Poem by Freeman

Let me drown, in your sea of tears
Feel the terrors of night 
let me shield from dark
Let us welcome light.

Alone becomes lonely, 
but then feels like home,
Comfortable,trapped
Loved ,cherished
as one.

Let us sink, thoughts of hope
Bring through our light.
The devilish feeling
resounds inside.
I wipe away your tears
and fears of the night.
Cry, shed your tears
I will be near your side.

© 2010 Freeman


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As with many works i do not know the cause but brotherhood and selflessness come to mind

Posted 8 Years Ago


very romantic yet mysterious

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh, I loev this!
I agree, this is comfort to read, it's very smooth
Strong Poem with Beautiful Words...


Posted 8 Years Ago


I felt very comforted as I read these words - speaks of a warm and generous spirit.

Posted 8 Years Ago


This was sweet and comforting like a cup of hot chocolate on a cold day...delicious.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Thank you very much......

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like this the best of all your pieces (and theyre all great) This is such a lovely write

Posted 8 Years Ago


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I really like this I found softness in this write.

Posted 8 Years Ago


a tender write

Posted 8 Years Ago


"let me shield from dark
Let us welcome light."
Better to have two to survive the night. Hard to fight some battles alone. I like this poem. Create a situation and answer.
"Comfortable,trapped
Loved ,cherished
as one."
I like this poem. A strong poem with beautiful words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on October 20, 2010
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Freeman
Freeman

United Kingdom



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