Déjà vu

Déjà vu

A Poem by Frieda P



We are given breath, we die
what fills those pages in between
are the complexities of life
 innuendos of an oblique allusion 

Kismet, fate, or some divine intervention
the paths we take are sometimes vague
is this all predestined or do we 
as humans, determine our fate

Has it been written in the stars long ago
on some crystal clouds or tissue paper,
should we abjure echoes of past?

Is Déjà Vu the very life we've repeated
felt beneath the soul's intrinsic liquid
like hot lava that bubbles and churns
I muse if life is preordained 

© 2013 Frieda P


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DrD
A unique and interesting theme that is rarely, if ever, touched in poetry. I found Deja vu very interesting and a great read.

A unique and interesting theme that is rarely, if ever, touched in poetry. I found Deja vu very interesting and a great read.

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Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks Divya, I'm not sure what I believe in anymore. ;-)
DrD

7 Years Ago

Bat s**t crazy? You mean like going bananas? Or like going ape s**t? Oh, but that's the same thin.. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

I mean like all of the above!!



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Beautifully crafted thoughts and opinions, thank you Frieda

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Posted 7 Years Ago


I know that feeling... something familiar yet not... and yes, my imagination had dared to venture on the what ifs... lovely work as always. ^_^

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Posted 7 Years Ago


I believe in Déjà. A lot of my dreams happen in the near future. I believe we use parts of our mind only. I like your description of a common skill most of us have. We just never attempt to use it. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

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Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much Coyote, always enjoy your reviews.
the paths we take are sometimes vague
is this all predestined or do we
as humans, determine our fate
was it written in the stars long ago
on some crystal clouds or tissue paper,
should we abjure echoes of past?

Is Déjà Vu the very life we've repeated
felt beneath the soul's intrinsic liquid
like hot lava that bubbles and churns
I muse if life is preordained


exquisitely written. beautiful!

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Sometimes the only means I have to reviewing a piece is by adding it to my library ;)

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Questions, questions -we have so many questions! Gee, seems like I've thought that before....lol
Interesting thoughts "on some crystal clouds or tissue paper", but then again it could be sweet tarts on cardboard, and then again.....oh Butter Fingers, I know I've heard this, seen this, thought this, imagined this all before! Or did you think it, write of it, - I just know I've been there too!!
All kidding aside - a great write!!


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Posted 7 Years Ago


interesting thoughts.. I often ponder these same things...
My favorite words in this storm of thought:
"Intrinsic liquid"
Marvelous! These to words are so beautiful at this moment like heavy mist blow in the wind before the clouds reach you on a hillside... watching ... expecting!

I hope you find the answers...

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Posted 7 Years Ago


Nice poem. Got any more pictures of you and your tits? ;)

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Posted 7 Years Ago


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Aidz

7 Years Ago

I have!!! Amazing what one can find when you Google
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

haha Wow, you can get an attitude adjustment on google? Do they have any hot latin guys? lol
Aidz

7 Years Ago

Pics of your Tits, attitude adjustment is a Fbook games by Zinga sorta liek words with friends
welcome to the multiverse

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Robin

7 Years Ago

I prefer sphericality myself
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Not really sure what that is, aside from a restaurant I know....
Robin

7 Years Ago

they must have an interesting menu

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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