Suicide Senyru

Suicide Senyru

A Poem by Frieda P
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Romancing Suicide

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You write of edgy dying

then all the young girls will swoon

deception by death



© 2013 Frieda P


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lol its tragic that people will cheapen their life in a way like that to get attention need a girl then living is the way to do that dying is just stupid for that reason however I won''t dismiss all suicidal tendencies as a pick up scheme some of us really hurt and should not be alone

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yep, I so agree, but to do the former is really destructive if you're young and impressionable read.. read more



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Well said Frieda. I like how you wrote romancing suicide. That's exactly what some are doing....sad

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Very sad, there are a handful of young people on this board who glorify it, as if it were something.. read more
Rob Santana

11 Years Ago

Thank you Frieda.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Very welcome...if it helps one person I would be over the moon jazzed.
well said :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Tarry, had to be said. ;-)
Tarry Franck

11 Years Ago

I understand totally. Glad you did it :)
necrophiliacs in the making...great. somehow, this reminds me of Twilight. lol but great write Frieda :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

so it seems, never did see Twilight, but thanks heaps! ;-)
Lina Grey

11 Years Ago

me neither, but with everyone in my school talking about it last year, i didn't really have to XP yo.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yeah, I don't really get the whole dead is alive or whatever phenomenon. ;-)
It happens everytime.especially to those young people like me who are deeply inlove with someone but leave them just so easily,,but i'm not that type,,it's just that everything happens for a reason..''there's so many fish in the sea,why stay in one place?''suicide will never be a solution to a wounded heart...i love this short,but lovely poem

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks muchly khicks, I knew you had more sense than that ;-)
lol its tragic that people will cheapen their life in a way like that to get attention need a girl then living is the way to do that dying is just stupid for that reason however I won''t dismiss all suicidal tendencies as a pick up scheme some of us really hurt and should not be alone

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yep, I so agree, but to do the former is really destructive if you're young and impressionable read.. read more
Love it love it ! Awesome write.

Ever try reversing the last line?? -- "Death by deception" ??
Just a thought.... Awesome tho' rare find...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks, that's actually the way I originally wrote it, but this got my point across better I thought.. read more
Did somebody piss in your Cheerios, girl? Where they at? You want I should rough them up for you? Nah...you already did. Good work, this.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Death is the best deception. Can twist-up the tale and ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You said a mouthful Coyote! Thanks my friend.
there is no romance in suicide, you are right.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

None whatsoever, thanks.
It might seem to be a good topic to discuss when people/friends get together, a "trendy thing", but it never is!! It is good you write of it to bring more discussion to it. Young girls are so easily impressed that one talks of it, and then another, and the one does it........TRAGIC!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

When one's life has been touched by this tragedy it sheds a whole new light. Thanks Sheila.

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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