Hooker Lips

Hooker lips, slurping tips

sweetly 

water my blossom

lightly blush my style

feed me gently 

watch it grow

earthly girth is, key

filament reaches for the sun

let the raise 

shine down on me

then sparkle me

 like the moon

my delicious 

tropical forest

singly carpel my stigma 

plant a seed, 

watch it grow

pucker up, 

the winds a tease

in full bloom, my petals wet

 my nectar sweet, 

watch me 

blow

 juicy, 

red,

 ripened,

 ready kisses

Reviews

[Antonio Valentino]

omg i think i went out with her once.. ! ..

i wonder if guys take longer over there when their peeing in the bushes

okay who said that, that was just wrong

you're welcome

okay now we have to rewrite the, instead of roses on my piano, id rather have, tulips, on my organ joke..

see.. there's never a break in comedy....... ..

so umm how much do these flowers charge for say like uhh.. an hour or so in a motel sex, i mean, six.. whew..

forget my lady, im getting those for me for valentines day..

okay thats enough this could go on all day

Frieda, this was funny, and clever and you know.. kinda sheckshay too ;))

seriously, great piece.. always fun and unpredictable, and impressive, to read one of your, flowery, pieces

welllll done!

:)

[Frieda P]

hahaha, I think you've lost your way, get back on the insanity thread Antonio!

[KeeD]

Holy ... WOW!!!!! You know red's my favorite color. I see anything red, I want it, I go crazy, it has a hold on me like I cannot explain. This piece was just so captivating & beautiful Favorited!!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

may be about a flower, but when the petals opened up i saw a prostitute...love for a night...those lips that can't be resisted.

engaging piece, you are so versatile with your work...always something fresh and new.


jacob

[Leigh]

Very juicy, like cherries, sweet. If I was a bee I would be having a great time

[Frieda P]

haha thanks!

[Coyote Poetry]

I like this type of poetry. The description open the door to imagination and nice visions. A woman had many tools to attract a man. A beautiful smile and lips can turn a man around. Very nice description in the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Frieda P]

Thanks Coyote, I thought it was one unique flower.

[PP]

Wise & Sexy!

[Frieda P]

thanks Tink, where ya been?

[PP]

My pleasure Frieda..off late I have been busy with my India travel! A bit of slow internet keeps me off writing as well! Will be back in no time..got a lot of catching up to do x

[InsanityWriter]

Excellent job. :) Interesting name choice for flowers... XD

[Frieda P]

Playful yes, my friend sent this to me, and I had to run with the hot lips! Thanks ;-D

[#33]

A seductrice with words.

[Frieda P]

;-) thanks for reading.

[stephen dillon]

beautiful

[Frieda P]

Glad you liked it stephen.

[Claire Twinn]

Flowers are such teases! I love the metaphor and idea of the flowers being sexually alluring. The flower's name is very politically incorrect now - perhaps it should be renamed e.g. 'woman who likes kissing' ?

[Frieda P]

Politically correct does not a good poem make, thanks!

[Constance Payne]

very nice; well written


my grandfather (Mom's Dad) would have said they look like a puckered ducks butt.

[Frieda P]

ha, if that were the name, i'd not have written a poem about it! thanks!