Dance With The Devil

Dance With The Devil

A Poem by Frieda P

           Why does the purple sky
           arouse me to
           wantonly dance with the devil

           maybe the majestic colors 
           perhaps 
           the sky's glowing embers

           amethyst burns me 
           drenched in a sultry scarlet dipped
            tonic of intoxicating fine wine 
                                          soaking up Sugarplums 

magpies swing on my heart
their lush warble 
entices a pulsating 

horizontal mambo
trip the light fandango
glide into the blue moon

 assaulting
a purple sky with mystic baubles
spins my head

 to magical nights
strumming wicked
  plucking at my
 heart beats
catapulted my senses
 senseless
blazing purple rain
 soothes my soul
its hypnotic allure
enraptures, entrances

 seduces me

why do shimmering
purple skies
 titillate me...?

burgeoning me
 over the blue moon
mesmerized in lipid pools
of your dark soul
i open my eyes 
and all I taste 
is essence
of you



© 2013 Frieda P


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another enthralling piece of cake. As and always. amethyst skies, dancing devil and magpies invite me a dance with the exhausted rubish devil. may the words rise that i may have them. your poems have been embalming the true sense of poetry and i am not buttering. we dont see really good poems these days.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Wow, I don't know how I missed this review, thanks so much...this has made my day critic h!



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This is very good, I like the wording and the title.
Well done ^^

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Bluefire

8 Years Ago

No problem.
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another enthralling piece of cake. As and always. amethyst skies, dancing devil and magpies invite me a dance with the exhausted rubish devil. may the words rise that i may have them. your poems have been embalming the true sense of poetry and i am not buttering. we dont see really good poems these days.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Wow, I don't know how I missed this review, thanks so much...this has made my day critic h!
OMG :D amethyst skies are so beautiful and the way you've gotten something so amazing out of them, you're beyond creative the idea, the allure of this poem, superb! I could see myself peer into the eyes of the devil, her soul dance with me under purple haze :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

;-) ha Kee, your responses always make me giggle like a silly school girl. MWAH!
ends with a graceful tribute and has a really classical vibrant feel to it, nice writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Thanks so much Sheema.
Oh, how I love the color purple.........every shade of it!! It is a majestic color, sending one to a blue moon to dip into the dark side of it.....a wonderful, come alive, visual write!!
I'm off to find my purple crayon, but I am leaving the blue one in the box...lol

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

haha Sheila, life is a box of crayons, isn't it?
To be lured into a dance with the devil, a sensual write, though those who dance with the devil tend to get burnt :) As usual Frieda amazingly done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Thanks Carolann, can get burnt, YES! But they have a balm for that ;-)
Carolann Dowsett

8 Years Ago

:-)
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

ha ;-P
Captivated me from the first line! The ending is perfect. Great imagery. You go girl!!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Wooo, glad you liked it! ;-)
well said the magic of it all really captivating something about the color purple has that effect and the way they danced over the moon very well written

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Would love to dance over a purple moon. :-)
Thanks Deron.
Deron Alexis

8 Years Ago

lol me 2
Frieda P

8 Years Ago

;-D
Fandango... I love that word. ;) Nice poem! ^_^

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

haha, me too...funny how certain words have their own charm, thanks :-)
Aww. Very beautiful and sensual and sweet at the same time.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Frieda P

8 Years Ago

Ooooo what a nice combo eh? ;-)

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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