Dance With The Devil

Dance With The Devil

A Poem by Frieda P

           Why does the purple sky
           arouse me to
           wantonly dance with the devil

           maybe the majestic colors 
           perhaps 
           the sky's glowing embers

           amethyst burns me 
           drenched in a sultry scarlet dipped
            tonic of intoxicating fine wine 
                                          soaking up Sugarplums 

magpies swing on my heart
their lush warble 
entices a pulsating 

horizontal mambo
trip the light fandango
glide into the blue moon

 assaulting
a purple sky with mystic baubles
spins my head

 to magical nights
strumming wicked
  plucking at my
 heart beats
catapulted my senses
 senseless
blazing purple rain
 soothes my soul
its hypnotic allure
enraptures, entrances

 seduces me

why do shimmering
purple skies
 titillate me...?

burgeoning me
 over the blue moon
mesmerized in lipid pools
of your dark soul
i open my eyes 
and all I taste 
is essence
of you



© 2013 Frieda P


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another enthralling piece of cake. As and always. amethyst skies, dancing devil and magpies invite me a dance with the exhausted rubish devil. may the words rise that i may have them. your poems have been embalming the true sense of poetry and i am not buttering. we dont see really good poems these days.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Wow, I don't know how I missed this review, thanks so much...this has made my day critic h!



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I danced with a few demons. No complains. Demons need love too. A very good poem. A lot of energy and nice visions create by the description. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha, maybe they need it, but do they deserve it is the million dollar question! Thanks Coyote.
And Purple it is!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:-)
Rest assured you twisting lyrical Rhumba...has taken its toll on me!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

make it light:) and smooth
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

always.............. ;-)
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

thx
Must be a Joisey thing ;-) This was an incredibly vivid piece that had me swaying a little in my chair...it took me to a pretty neat place in my mind, a place I liked immensely. And the format is fun...always a pleasure to read these pieces from you, Frieda. Your imagination is second to none.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm elated you like it kimmer, the format is something I've been working on since that part of it is.. read more
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

The thought you put into this one is evident and I know I'm not the only one who appreciates it. My.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Doing a happy dance! :-D
It sounds wonderfully sensual. I wonder why it's only the devil you dance with?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha good question Claire, inquiring minds want to know eh? You would be the one to ask that questio.. read more
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You have a great imagination when it comes to words. You play on images we can see through your minds eye with the selection of words you choose.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Happy Face, much appreciated. :-)
I goddamn guarantee you the devil's a great dancer. Great poem Frieda.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha Baby, sounds like you've done this dance before, thanks ;-)
It's a vicious cycle, some things the more we resist the more we want. Add to that something or someone that pierces our core in just the right way and wow aren't the moments before we cave futile. We either have to run far away or .... hmm

Great write

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm loving your tangent here Revery....
hmmm, thanks so much
Oooooooft. Das it's sehr sehr fantatisch meine freund ;-)

Danke!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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s y e

11 Years Ago

Ja, das ist richtig ;-) This is true. :-P
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

That's right, that's right. ;-P
s y e

11 Years Ago

It is right ;-) Haha!

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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