Who's Sorry Now

Who's sorry now

what goes around, comes around

there's talk that she's cheating on you

exactly what you did to me

karma's a b***h and all that s**t

a broken heart...don't get me started

listened to all the love songs

cried me a river and it cried it some more

now put on your head phones and suck it

your cheating heart is gonna smart

when you find out her lover

is none other....

                                        

Reviews

[KeeD]

Haha Karma's a b***h, but oh do I love her. This was an amusing piece and you stabbed him right in the jewels with this one. Respect and Loyalty is basically what one expects, can't provide it.. don't expect to ride it! I love your poetic attacks :D their so badass and although amusing to us, this should hit whoever its aimed at..and hit them hard :) great write :D xoxo

[Frieda P]

Haha you gotta get em where it hurts most! Those freaking jewels of yours, well....not your's, in general, you know what I mean, ha...I'm outa here...................grazie!

[KeeD]

lmao a hit a swing and a near miss .. My poor jewels :P :) you're such a talented writer.

[KeeD]

poem after poem every day I think you write a new one and their all beyond good.. Most defining the meaning of great

[Frieda P]

Ha, is that a pick up line or WHAT? ;-P

[Night]

...yep, worst case scenario...losing your chick to a chick...oh what tangled webs we weave...great write, loved the Hitchcock twist at the end...sweet.:)

[Frieda P]

haha why is that worse, cause you can't compete with a woman? And if it were Hitchcock, he'd have had her stab in him the shower, naked. ;-)

[Night]

..lol....I loved Anthony Perkins in that film....and to answer your first question it's a matter of pride for the man...you know manhood an everything...:)

[Frieda P]

Not being a man, I can't relate but I can only imagine with your huge egos! :-P

[Night]

...ouch.

[Frieda P]

ha, you know I only kid, sort of... ;-P

[C.C. Marx]

OOOhh I do love a good karma story, how people don't realize things that go around do come back around amazes me. Sounds like he deserved it, nicely done

[Frieda P]

;-) thanks!

[s y e]

Haha this is so true and relatable. Lolizes made noodles laugh! Hehehe. I loved it. I laughed big time!

[Frieda P]

ha must be pretty funny to get a noodle to laugh ;-)

[s y e]

Haha, it was. Lol. But you already new that I loved it ;-)

[Frieda P]

hahahaha shhhhhhhhh! noodles has a big pasta mouth! ;-P

[s y e]

OMG, noodles has a HUGE freakin mouth. :-P You love me though ;)

[s y e]

;) Noodles says Frieda is beautiful!!!!!!! ;-)

[Frieda P]

hahahahaha you're a nutty noodle!

[s y e]

But you a pwetty Frieda. Gorgeous!!

[Frieda P]

ha you've never seen me before coffee! ;-P

[s y e]

Lol, just a pwetty with bed head! Lol :-)

[Frieda P]

nah when you get older, your face starts to look like your pillow lol ;-P

[s y e]

Omg, you don't look like a pillow! Your gorgeous!

[Frieda P]

*rolling my eyes* @ you, did you pass out yet?!

[s y e]

Nope!!! Wide awake!!! O.O

[Frieda P]

Oh gawd, I was hoping you were zonked!

[s y e]

Nope. Lol!!!!!

[s y e]

Actually, I am but I don't wanna sweep.

[Michael G.]

Fangs and claws and fire shooting from the eyes. Oh well, sounds like he deserves it.
(Remind me not to get you mad.)

[Frieda P]

ha my write is worse than my bite! ;-)
thanks Michael...

[David Scott]

Ha! You did jump on the pond! Ha!
This is perfect! LMAO.
I know it was supposed to be a little vengeful, but I just can't stop smiling...
Your too funny.

[Frieda P]

There you go again David, believing everything you read. ;-)

[Annabelle Lee]

OUCH. poetry bites. Way to go!

[Frieda P]

haha that made me laugh. ;-)

[LA Lorena]

Oh yes! Ultimate irony and thrust of the knife! You vindictive little...... LOL!
your sense of humour is evil FP, I knew I liked you for good reason!

[Frieda P]

*batting my eyes* @ you! LOL

[LA Lorena]

are you trying to flirt with me FP? LOL. You know I only hit right.

[Frieda P]

You know what 'they' say, never say Never! lmao!

[LA Lorena]

you're in a good mood today. what are you up to? what mayhem might you be causing? ;)

[Frieda P]

The minions got me started early this morning, haven't decided yet, thinking of knocking over the coffee shop that cute guy owns.... ;-)

[LA Lorena]

I think you lost me on the way. what cute guy and what coffee shop? LOL. send me a PM, I'm too bleary-eyed to see cryptic.

[Frieda P]

haha not really going to do it silly girl...just a small coffee shop Shot In Your Eye...you must need sleep too!