Petal Senyru

Petal Senyru

A Poem by Frieda P
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Read My Lips

"
What a woman wants

kiss my lips with much ardor

A sensuous touch 

© 2013 Frieda P


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you put that picture on purpose didn't you ;) love your work you gonna get in trouble one day they gonna be all "(O.O) She's to awesome to be left alive (O.O) " but yes i think real women are those that care for love and tenderness and are willing look until they find a man with the same idea

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha ducks?! whatever floats your boat hon ;-P
Deron Alexis

11 Years Ago

na here in the Caribbean we're all about double jointed girls XD
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL!!!!



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I could have painted your words in a multitude of hues and colors beyond the spectrum of the human vision...but i leave it to the other fairie-folk in here...while saying that you are an elegant forever romantic poet.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Woooo jazzing on this review, thanks!
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

11 Years Ago

Swooon
Ah, tis true, tis true! ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I think most women would agree, yes. :-)
You know everything :))))
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL I wish!! ;-)
... and keeps happening...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

LOL that darn script...I hate when s**t happens, should be alright now...!
Jibey

11 Years Ago

I understand... it's what a man wants to do...
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:-P
This is like to say in the Army. S**t happen. Just try not to step into the s**t and move on. Thank you for the interesting poem.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

That's too funny, the name of the script I was 'attempting' to use was called 'S**t Happens'! ha
Coyote Poetry

11 Years Ago

Need to delete my comment. I do re-check on my work. I have done some wild things without knowing. I.. read more
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ciao Coyote, it's fine...I got a kick out of it to be honest!
Erm...is there supposed to be words?
Because I see none...I can't interpret nothing o.o
Don't go into a writing career...?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Yea, thanks for the vote of confidence ;-)
Perri

11 Years Ago

Oh, there are words there now, just my computer wouldn't load them...sorry D:

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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