Rouge Burnished Soul

Rouge Burnished Soul

A Poem by Frieda P

         Rouge burnished, ardent soul,
                   butterflies inflate the heart
    billow above the furor 
 and disquietude

close your eyes
         in wakeful slumber
      glean a thousand kisses
                        & marshmallow doves

masterpiece
         within soul's empty vessel
portal of delirium
                 and fine red wine

images
                         of crystalline apertures 
                        to Arcadia

whirling
                          on a frenzied bed
                                     of plumose embraces

promises
                  of purple cloud nine abodes

abandon
                  the rootlessness of veracity

~floating~

                             on the breast 

                           of an angel's arousal

                                                              

© 2013 Frieda P


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Quite beautiful, serene and sensual all in a neat little package.

Rouge burnished, ardent soul,
butterflies inflate the heart
billow above the furor
and disquietude

I love this opening verse, how could one stop reading with an entrance like this?

glean a thousand kisses
& marshmallow doves

The stuff that dreams are made of. It seems I may not be the only romantic around here. Very beautifully done.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

OH gawd, now I feel absolutely naked! lol ;-P
Jack...

7 Years Ago

Nice to see you again...
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

LOL!



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Loved the first stanza. It was beautiful!

"Rouge burnished, ardent soul,
butterflies inflate the heart
billow above the furor
and disquietude"

Wow! Holy cheeseballs!!! Damn and flip flops & all that jazzy!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

6 Years Ago

Awh thanks so much noodlebumble, this was always one of my favorites xo
Winner`placed #4 in Writer's Cafe Next Top Poet 1.4 :-)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Subtly sexy - a dream within a dream of smoldering desires. Nice penning :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

'A dream within a dream' love that! Thanks Leona.
This poem gives a sense of beauty with no flaws at all
Loved it

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Was pretty funny though, amazing what one stupid letter can do...ha
Dalia

7 Years Ago

>.< yeah your right.. good thing it made you smile c:
I hate when I make spelling mistakes tho.. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

me too, but we're only human, right? Spell check has screwed up the words I've intended at times, s.. read more
Very well done, once again. ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Merci beaucoup lovely Skittles. ;-)
An invitation to the senses to take a dance around the maypole...this is just loaded with magic and fairies and fireflies and other gentle things, at least till the last couple of lines when sensuality chimes in to get the last word...you are blowing me away with what you've been writing these days ;)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

Haha the only thing I would be good at is firing people...no check that, I couldn't even do that cuz.. read more
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

lol, I hate firing people, even when they're a******s, it's not easy ;-)
kublakhan27

7 Years Ago

Haha Indeed it is not ;P
snap out of it! (i always wanted to say that, just like Cher in "moonstruck") very lovely piece frieda, sensual and lilting...took me on a cleverly woven enchanting spell of blissful words. masterfully penned.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

haha, did you wanna smack me like that too? I loved that movie!!
Thanks quin ;-)
Every letter and line is dreamish... You voice a sweet, sensual lullaby to bliss and paint all the roses red. An extravagant escape...

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Woo, this review made me dance, you made my day Craig, truly...
An owl on the moon

7 Years Ago

Oh, Frieda... thank YOU for sharing such bliss with all of us.. the world needs you.
Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Now you're gonna make me blush, and I don't blush very easily...I'm humbled, thanks again Craig. x
beautifully worded poem :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much for reading me KatDarkness, much appreciated.

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