Sunset Haiku

Sunset Haiku

A Poem by Frieda P

Glorious sunset

relished end of day's longing

sets the skies ablaze


© 2013 Frieda P


Author's Note

Frieda P
Won 2nd place in Do You Haiku? contest...

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Oh, so very lovely..........I want to go there!!! Giuseppe took some pics of a sunset recently here in FL that this reminds me to post. It was a progressive view of about 5 pics.
I think if I had to say this much in this few words I would literally "burn up" in that sunset....lol
Great job!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


A beautiful image. It puts me right there. Where the oranges blend into vibrant pinks that melt into lush lavenders as the clouds streak in wisps across the deepening blue sky. I love it!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Congratulations...sets great mood

Posted 11 Years Ago


Grats! Thats wonderful :) Beautiful I love the dizzy feel of the pic, that went with it, love it ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Corset, yes it is kind of dizzying, you're right!
Just amazing, how you made me in 5-7-5 enjoy this view, you're stunning.
Thank you Frieda dear,

- Elisa

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thank you Eli dear, you're most kind.

11 Years Ago

You're welcome dear :) X
I could picture a the sun setting in a flaming orange sea! Great images created there.


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Nice imagery there Divya...thanks!
DIVYA

11 Years Ago

You brought it out with your inspiring words.
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:-)
You've just whisked me away with the imagery of this wonderful sunset.... brings back memories of many a beautiful sunsets I've seen on my travels.

Wonderful ... :O)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

I'm so happy it did, that's exactly what I was thinking when I wrote it! ;-)

Thanks..... read more
Yellow Butterfly

11 Years Ago

Your welcome....
Yellow Butterfly

11 Years Ago

:O)
Beautiful haiku Freida.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Marie, glad you enjoyed it.
Lovely form, lovely haiku. (Lovely pictures, too!)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Michael, nothing like a sunset especially from the beach.
Oh yes I can picture it now *sigh*

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks Dale, I wrote it for that Haiku contest, they are stunning aren't they?
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

11 Years Ago

Oh hell yes :)
Frieda P

11 Years Ago

:-)

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Added on February 12, 2013
Last Updated on May 26, 2013
Tags: sunset, Haiku

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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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