Sunset in A Bottle

Sunset in A Bottle

A Poem by Frieda P

If you could capture
                sunset in a bottle
would you share it
          with all the world to see
   could you put it on a shelf 
          & keep it for yourself
   should we share the trappings
 within a smile
planting seeds of hope
          to sprout a miracle
     if we graciously captured
               sunset in a bottle

 

© 2013 Frieda P


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We had the most amazing sunset the other evening, so much so the Kid was like, "What is that in the sky?" It was the sun, obviously *laugh* but it looked so cool. Dark orange and hung low...you could look right at it and not hurt your eyes. This reminded me of that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sorry I missed this one the kimmer, that sounds lovely, and *laugh* the Kid...
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

No worries ;-)



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Beauty is poignant in this simple yet beautiful poem. I love it, very pretty and the rhyme scheme gives it that playful undertone. Exquisite, Frieda. Exquisite.
-Maddie

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You keep changing your identity sweet Maddie, you're confusing the heck out of me....! Thanks so mu.. read more
A. V. Madison

11 Years Ago

Haha I'm sorry, I get another idea for a name/picture, and voila! At least I sign my name at the bot.. read more
Sunset in a bottle. Sounds like Tequila

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Ha! You might be right Baby....thanks.
We had the most amazing sunset the other evening, so much so the Kid was like, "What is that in the sky?" It was the sun, obviously *laugh* but it looked so cool. Dark orange and hung low...you could look right at it and not hurt your eyes. This reminded me of that.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Sorry I missed this one the kimmer, that sounds lovely, and *laugh* the Kid...
KAOlmsted

11 Years Ago

No worries ;-)
Very beautiful and enigmatic imagery.. Loved the topic itself. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Thanks so much Kajal. :-)
Beautiful, once again. ;)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Grazie Skittles. :-)
Jim Croce would like this, I think. I can almost hear a few chords being played, to find the right "feel."
Warm thoughts, this one.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

Glad you got 'warm' thoughts, sending more your way Michael.
Michael G.

11 Years Ago

Much appreciated. I can always use the warmth.
Awww, this is so sweet! I am gonna buy one of those :P Sounds great ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha I think they're selling them on Amazon ;-P
s y e

11 Years Ago

Perfecto! I'll order mine tonight
very nice image to see the sun in a bottle..i think it was better if you have chosen somthing bigger than a bottle but i know you have chosen this image to show the impossibility of doing that. anyways, thanks to god, nobody can put the sun in a bottle and keep it for themselves..i would be living in darkness right now..

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Frieda P

11 Years Ago

ha I didn't choose it, I came upon that picture and it moved me...very true, if it could be bottled .. read more
...how about I send you some sunshine from my heart to yours...that'll do the trick...lol. Sweet write my friend...=)

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Frieda P

11 Years Ago

You always do David, you always do..... ;-)
oh wow this is very good. Wish I could bottle sunshine. Wish i could send some to people as well. Amazing write

Posted 11 Years Ago



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Added on February 18, 2013
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If you want to know me, read my poetry, it's all in there. I am a mother of three sons (my finest moments) a sister, a survivor and a little bit crazy. I lost my beloved sister to suicide, so you'll.. more..

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