You Move Me

A very lovely woman I've met here sent me this photo, I was moved by it, read it as you wish.

Awe struck... 

        by the beauty of

        your light

       all the colors of passion

 swept me away

to a mystical place

 in my soul's sight

Fire and ice

 rapturous entanglements

weaving and staking

 its claim in space

I see the wonderment

     of a child's' laughter

The dignity of royalty,

 the fight for life,

tearful cries of joy

 and blissful encounters

a newborn life

   that explodes onto this earth

           crimson that connects

 our lifeblood and ardor

  Fierceness of a lioness 

         protecting her cubs

honesty and true blue

          dedication with fervor

majestic moutains

            of pride and grace

A safe place to rest

 the weary head at peace

  I see all these colors

          that shade your luster

it shapes my world

            glistens my hope 

     and moves my being

Reviews

[Angel of Heart's]

Only someone with a beautiful heart and spirit could have written this poem....You...your heart...and the words that you spill...Sometimes its hard to see the rainbow through dark glasses....such a tender piece that reaches into the depths....
I think this one is very telling and very well done......I thank you for the share....and for being so special....:)

[Frieda P]

That is quite a compliment coming from you Angel, one who writes such constant beauty in her work...thanks so much for this great review.

[KAOlmsted]

I need to say something candidly and then I will never say anything even remotely close to this again...you know I like olive juice in my martini, right?

[InsanityWriter]

Both are amazing! I enjoyed. ^_^ Thanks for sharing! :)

[Frieda P]

Thanks Skittle, happy that you enjoyed it. ;-)

[Mark]

This speaks volumes to me of strength, beauty, and dignity,very eloquently expressed. Nice write!

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much Mark, glad you enjoyed it.

[Rashmi Kulal]

Wow! This is brilliant!

[Frieda P]

Wow, thanks for this lovely review Rashmi.

[Rashmi Kulal]

You deserve it! :)

[Michael G.]

A very solid write. This shows how well your imagination is working. Nice picture.

[Frieda P]

At least something's still working. ;-)
Thanks Michael.

[s y e]

wow, that picture is awesome! :-O WOAH!
Nicely written!

[Frieda P]

I know, isn't it wild, I love it...thanks noodles!

[s y e]

Wild doesnt even begin to explain, I stared at it for ages likes O.O dafuq man? LOL

[Frieda P]

Priscilla sent it to me, and I did the same thing!

[s y e]

Haha, like mother like daughter ;-)

[Frieda P]

mmmhmmm

[s y e]

Thats the way uh huh uh huh I like it uh huh uh huh xP

[Frieda P]

;-D

[s y e]

xD

[khalid]

you are always surprising me with your ability to write about all life aspects. another wonderful poem..

[Frieda P]

What a great compliment khalid, thanks for this great review my friend.

[khalid]

i know that you know it is not a compliment at all..humble poetess..

[Frieda P]

Lol, it's not?

[khalid]

it is not a compliment! it is the truth..

[Frieda P]

Oh, ha, I thought maybe it meant something different where you're from ;-)

[Night]

Beautiful...=)

[Frieda P]

Thanks so much David, I felt this one...glad you liked it! ;-)

[char]

Wow. This poem is insanely diverse. You can pull a few interpretations out at once. That makes this piece a success. And I love that you used "ardor" and "fervor"; those were in my Frankenstein vocabulary. It's nice to see them reused in a pretty poem.

[Frieda P]

Thanks Anna, I was hoping that's the reader would see a few interpretation's, your review made me smile.